Monday, January 9, 2012

Writing a Great Beginning for 2012


A new year is like a blank page.  It's a time to write a new beginning.  Maybe set some goals so that by the end of the year, you are in a better place than where you started.  So how do you write a great beginning to a new year?  Let's think of it this way:  the year before you is a book you have yet to write.  In some ways, a book is all about the beginning.  Nobody will read a book through to the end if it has a crummy beginning.  Similarly, many resolutions or goals never make it past January.  So, how can you write a great beginning to the novel of 2012?

Start With the Action:
Many writers start their novels too early, making the reader wade through a bunch of boring until the action finally starts.  A great beginning for a book starts the moment something is different for the main character.  A reader really doesn't need a buildup to that moment.  Any necessary background information can be handled later.  But, to really grab a reader's interest, a writer needs to capture that pivotal moment at the start.  This really is a skill, and I'm a lot better now than I used to be.  Before, I could write an entire chapter, realize I'd started in the wrong place, and then have to use my friendly delete button.

Similarly, when writing the beginning of a new year, you need to start immediately with the action.  Make sure your goal is something that matters to you, and then, don't wait until tomorrow to begin the work.  Your pivotal moment is 2012.  You just have to decide how that moment is going to be different for you, then begin immediately to make it happen.  Unfortunately, life's delete button is not nearly so convenient.

Don't Get Caught in the Past:
Another reason you will lose your reader at the beginning of a book is by including too much boring background information.  Is it really that important to know the main character's full life story in the first chapter?  You must capture the reader's interest first, then, as you go on, you can fill in the necessary details.

To write a great beginning, you really must forget the past in a lot of ways.  Focus on your goal and what you need to do to achieve it.  Forget about how many other goals you've made and never accomplished.  Past failures can distract, discourage, and derail the plot of your life.  Yes, it is important to remember the lessons you've learned from the past.  But don't let the past be the focus or be the compass for your beginning.

Write With the End in Sight:
The two most important parts of a book are the Beginning and the End.  If a novel doesn't have a good beginning, I won't keep reading.  If it doesn't end well, the entire book is completely ruined for me.  I will usually remember a book through the filter of its ending and how it made me feel.  So, accordingly, it is very important to begin a book with the end in sight.  What is your goal?  Where are your characters and this action headed?  I don't like wasted words or scenes.  Every action and event should have a purpose to the plot and resulting conclusion.  I love a book when, after reading the ending, I can look back and understand and appreciate the choices the author made, even at the beginning, to prepare for the climax and that satisfying finale.

When beginning a new goal or venture, it is vitally important that you keep your eye on the prize.  What is it you want to accomplish?  The vision of you reaching that finale has to be so strong that it can carry you on days when you don't feel like trying anymore. You have to capture the dream of where you want to be next December and be willing to stubbornly replay that dream when you get discouraged. 

The page is blank; the pen in your hand.  How will you begin your 2012 Once Upon a Time?

Friday, January 6, 2012

And the Winners Are . . .

Congratulations!

$10 Amazon Gift Card:
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Copy of BAGGAGE CLAIM:
June M.
Lisa Richards/alterlisa

Thank you to all who entered!

Thursday, December 29, 2011

Happy New Year 2012 Giveaway Hop


2012  New Year Giveaway Hop
One Winner will get a $10 Amazon gift card!
Two runners-up will each get a Kindle copy of my new book,
BAGGAGE CLAIM!


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Montana native, Rachel Saunders, is looking forward to her all-expense paid weekend trip to New York. But, when her luggage is lost and she is accosted by an infuriating Homeland Security agent named Dawson Tate, events take a dangerous turn. Now, can she and Dawson elude their enemies and prevent a terrorist attack before the bomb in their possession is detonated in the center of Manhattan--all while keeping their obvious attraction to one another in check? Find out in this Romantic Thriller.

BAGGAGE CLAIM is Book One in the TRU EXCEPTIONS series

Thursday, December 22, 2011

All I Want for Christmas is a Memorable Book!


The week before Christmas is insane in my life.  Christmas cards, presents, wrapping, baking, insurmountable projects . . . all in addition to the normal craziness.  And then there's the constant:   What am I forgetting?  Lists are running unceasingly through my mind.  Did I remember all the presents?  Will my son really like the new toy I got him or will he be disappointed?  Did my sister really want THAT?  Husband didn't ever say what he wanted.  How many days do I have left?
So, why am I putting myself through such misery?   The short answer is that I want to make this Christmas special for my family, especially for my two young boys.  I want it to be memorable.  Following this train of thought, I found myself reflecting on what makes something memorable.  What Christmases do I remember most from when I was a child?  Surprisingly, I don't remember the toys.  I can recall very few of the toys I got for Christmas growing up.  I know there were some I absolutely had to have at the time and toys I thoroughly enjoyed, but years later I don't remember them.
I do remember what Christmas FELT like.  The times I cherish and remember most are when I saw my other family members happy and enjoying things.  I remember being together:  playing games , lighting the candles for our advent,  eating a big meal, laughing.   I remember loving the feeling of giving a gift to someone I loved and seeing them enjoy it.  I remember loving that my grandparents got to come stay with us.  Christmases weren't perfect, but I the warmth and love I felt from my family is what I cherish and remember most.
Maya Angelou is credited with saying, "People may not remember exactly what you did, or what you said, but they will always remember how you made them feel."   I've heard a saying often applied to teaching, but I think it's actually broader than that.  I don't remember the details of Christmases past, but I do remember the feelings. 
Surprisingly, the same is true with the other major train of thought running through my life right now:  books.  When I think about the books I've read in the past, which ones do I remember?  I may not remember the full plot lines, but I do remember the feelings associated with a book.  Was it exciting?  Was it romantic enough to make my heart pound?  A good book is one that makes you FEEL.  It draws you in so you either feel what the characters are experiencing or feel the message the book is trying to convey, maybe both.  I've read a lot of books that are boring.  I never really connected with the characters enough to feel their experience.  However, I've also read books that I couldn't put down until I was sure the main character was going to be okay.
I try to be conscious about this as a writer.  I want to spin a web with my words that creates a different dimension in which a reader can escape.   My characters are never perfect, but they're believable and easy to relate to.  I try to draw the reader in to their lives and problems, sharing their struggles and emotions within a strong, exciting plot.  With each sentence, I try to make the reader feel.  The delete button is usually my best friend when writing.  I'll repeatedly change a sentence just because the word choice or order doesn't convey the right feeling.
I want to be the kind of author who writes good books--books that make the reader feel.  I want the reader to almost become lost in the world I spin with words.  They need be invested in my characters, to see the actions with their eyes and feel the emotions painted on the page.  I want my readers to have my world become theirs for awhile.  And when they're done reading one of my books, I want them to remember how it made them FEEL.
So, besides reading a writing a memorable book, what kind of Christmas do I want this year?  I want my sons to feel loved.  I want them to see their mommy relaxed and happy, not running around trying to make sure the last gift has the perfect bow.  I want us to enjoy being together as a family.  I want to play games, read the Christmas story together, and laugh.  And when my sons grow up, I want them to remember how they felt at Christmas.
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